Monday, December 1, 2008

Aidan Greene ~ "The Dog"

I am just going to say when you are gone for three to four hours, keep your dog in a fenced in area... just incase he might cause some sort of mischief. You never know what might happen.
One morning my family and I were sitting on the couch when Ding-Dong. The door bell rang. My mom said, “I’ll get it.” When my mom opened the door, it was one of her friends from work. She said, “ Can you watch my dog for a day I am on vacation?” My mom said excitedly “Sure we would all love to.” My sister and I cheered, “YIPPEE!”
After a good hour of play with the dog Max, we decided to go to the Wave Water Park which is radical by the way. We all gobbled our lunch, slipped on our bathing suits, snatched our towels and bolted out the door. But we made one terrible mistake. We left the crazy dog all alone in the house.
When we got home the dog was no where to be found. We checked in the guest room, no dog. We checked in the bathroom, no dog. Wy sister and I checked in our rooms, still no dog. Then I checked in my parent’s room and I was staring at a giant gaping hole in my parents screen door. After about five minutes, the dog came through the huge hole. I felt a little guilty. We all looked at him and he twitched his head to the side. Then after a couple of seconds he walked back outside.
If you do not want this to happen to your screen door then keep your dog in a fenced in area. Unless you want a hole in your screen door. Like I said you never know what might happen. P.S the owner was shocked by the news.

6 comments:

  1. 1. I have seen that to other screen doors and that is why we don't have one.
    2. That is so weird the way the dog just ripped through the screen door.
    3. Nice vocabulary you used lots of good ones like bolted, slipped, gobbled, and snatched.


    Brady Anderson

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  2. 1. I liked how you talked about how you shouldn't leave a CRAZY DOG not in a inclosed area unless you want a hole in the wall.

    2. I thought that was weird when you said he twitched his head then walked outside again.

    3. I liked your description of how you guys reacted.

    -Braxton M.

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  3. 1. i like how you gave addvice about dogs i am so glad i dont have one.
    2. i liked how you showed your ctf and cr

    3. great dialoge!
    Justin H

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  4. 1.i really lile your begging of the story.
    2.great character thoughts and feeling.
    3.i really like your dialoge



    tenzing

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  5. Thanks for the tip!

    I could picture how fast you guys got ready for the water park.

    I could feel how scared you were, trying to find the dog.

    You had good description so I could see you and your sister trying to find the dog.

    Great job!
    Caitlin

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  6. 1.I liked it how you wanted to take care of the dog, and wanted to go to the water park.

    2.I liked it how you took responsibility in looking for the dog, and also telling the owner about it.

    3.I liked it how you explained your emotions and the owner's.
    greate job!!
    ~Matt Schmillen~

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